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black
Contributed by
steamsaint
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Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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the sky is black
i fall to my knees
the crimson rains from me
the wound is in my heart
i do not cry
i only pray
it feels like the end
i do not wish to stay
the sky opens up
down comes an angel
and she tells me to be strong
but my heart has turned black
not even her words will help
the silence has taken over my life
and my heart has turned black
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2003-02-05 03:30:00]
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Re: black
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 05:07:31 PM AEST
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| oh...this is so sad...beautiful... |
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Re: black
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 11:43:34 PM AEST
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| I feel the pain ...its an awesome poem |
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Re: black
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by Chaos666 on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 01:32:55 AM AEST
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| This is really honest....another one that speaks a million volumes.... |
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Re: black
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by MattTheMan on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:25:39 PM AEST
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| Okay, this poem is just amazing. It's short, kind of simple, yet it paints an incredible picture of the scene. You did some awesome things with words in this poem. |
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