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Today
Contributed by
silverscent
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Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 04:38:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Today,
As I was walking,
I crushed a midge with my
Newly coloured lips
The same lips I once kissed you with.
After a pondering second, I concluded,
I was mistaken; I should have kissed
The blood sucking punkie
With passion instead
Today,
The wind was brisk
Spraying dust into my eyes,
On the wings of deaths head hawk
It spurted burning floods
But, the dampened; it soon dried,
And my tears were not for you.
Even if the irritation makes
Me squint for a while or more
Today,
As I was eating
On a shaded wooden bench,
The insect military invaded my meal.
A good swat with a newspaper proved
Insignificant - just as the trampled ant was.
I imagined it was you, as the headlines
Hurtled from above, this time,
You were helpless
With modesty dear,
Let me apologise for my bitterness.
See, it is only my mood for
Today
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silverscent
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2006-05-06 04:38:31]
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Re: Today
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 02:22:59 AM AEST
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Another stunner-I'm dissapointed that I hadn't learned of you sooner. Fantastic sonics throughout, particularly in the conclusive half of the first strophe.
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