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where do i go now
Contributed by
ichiban_girl
on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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you were my friend
or so i thought
i went to you
as a shelter
where do i go now?
you helped me
deal with life itself
you lent me a hand
and open arms
where do i go now?
you shunned me
when i opened
my heart and soul
you killed my dreams
where do i go now?
you burned me
as i got to close
too close to you
to close to reality
where do i go now?
my faith is gone
all hope is faded
and there you are
happy as can be
where do i go now?
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2003-02-05 04:30:00]
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Re: where do i go now
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 11:31:15 PM AEST
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| well written, it feels as if u were very hurt by your friend. Ivy. |
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Re: where do i go now
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 10:08:01 PM AEST
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sad write, but you can move on you just find a new reason too that's all. thanks for sharing this.
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Re: where do i go now
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 02:50:54 PM AEST
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Nice poem, ichiban_girl... There are lots of places to go now....
Jenni |
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