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falling
Contributed by
86noReturn86
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Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 09:10:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Im falling so hard
I cant hold on
Even if i tried
there's nothing there to grasp
Everyone is already gone
Living life
while im here carving these scars
Im falling so hard
i dont feel like reaching out
i just want to fall
maybe ill get somewhere far
Who knows,
maybe the pain will stop
If i just fall
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2006-05-06 21:10:17]
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Re: falling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 09:52:56 PM AEST
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beautiful, emotional poetry. don't we all feel like we're falling sometimes? it's unique...especially the twist at the end...i love it
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