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Apart
Contributed by
The_Young_Poet
on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 12:33:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All I could do was just stand there
Astonished to what happened before me
To feel all the unfairness
Put down on my heart
I always thought wed never part
But thats the sad thing
Nothing could stop the hurtful end
End to our love
I always had the thought
Till death do us part
But thats all in the dark
To think our relationship was a piece of art
That we couldnt be separated
But I was wrong
Maybe we didnt just belong
Now I think, did I do something wrong?
Now you just left me in the rain
Leaving me to dry
I guess we cant all have a piece of the pie
This Time
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The_Young_Poet
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2006-05-07 00:33:27]
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Re: Apart
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 01:23:18 AM AEST
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Yes and thats the meaning of life.
You did great in this piece. |
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Re: Apart
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by ek_da_poet on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 01:10:46 PM AEST
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| this is zell, i cant believe how many people viewed your poems and posted in only like a few days, your pretty good at this, better then me(crying) good job keep on writing |
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