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Dissatisfied
Contributed by
keilantra
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Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 10:24:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Give me something tangible
Unlike your stupid heart
You cannot blame me for being dissatisfied.
You think that your pretty words will woo me
My dear, its amazing how cluless you may be
I wouldn't love you if you made me
You continously leave me dissastisfied.
You have a heart of gold
And a cubic zarconia smile
I've got a heart of stone
And a nonchalant style
We don't mix (or mold).
You bore me so easily
I grow tired of your games
You paint a fine line between innocence and insanity
But you're always on the other side
(Stop calling my name).
Take "No" for my answer
Begone! You only take up my space,
Leave now and go with your mess,
Your crocodile tears and heart-stains.
You did not quench my [insatiable] thirst;
It's still there and my throat and lungs are still bleeding dry,
Your breath is warm with love and distrust
And you continuously leave me dissatisfied.
Copyright ©
keilantra
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2006-05-07 10:24:02]
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Re: Dissatisfied
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 04:03:49 PM AEST
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Nice write *kei*, I agree. Ya ought not mix or mold with such a mixed up mess o' dissatisfaction! Talk to ya in a pm.
wabl
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Re: Dissatisfied
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:51:36 AM AEST
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great rhythm. great write
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