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Limerick- Blue Sunday
Contributed by
ilovelillbj
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Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 12:05:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's Sunday, but not as I know it,
Blink back the tears, try not to show it-
That for one kiss tonight,
I'd strive and i'd fight
As I sit here and alone I go it.
Copyright ©
ilovelillbj
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2006-05-08 12:05:37]
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Re: Limerick- Blue Sunday
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by kaitee on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 12:35:34 PM AEST
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hmmm......interesting
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Re: Limerick- Blue Sunday
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by Val-Hundra on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 12:21:14 PM AEST
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| This is... different. You're right, the form doesn't really fit the text. Also your meter is a bit off, especially in the last line. |
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