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your shadow that walks
Contributed by
patti
on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:15:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am your shadow The one that holds you together The person who is of a balance to you Like the sun and the moon Like the sky and the ocean Im your drug, your obsession Memories of me are what keep you alive Moments flash by seconds in your head I am able to defy what you mean My poetry fills your soul My words are like a lullaby in your very breath My voice, loves in you My eyes, see in you My scent, wonders around you There is not a single moment you could live with out me You have become a slave to my existence And also to yours You could only become what is of mine You can be the darkness and I the light that brightens you You can be the air that I now poisoned with my existence, I have pressured you to be what you are You could not complain You are the reflection I see in the mirror You have become the person who follows their own shadow You can only imagine a life with me You have surrounded your own existence around the one you so called love You have experience me from a distance and already you have experienced something I have not You have created a fantasy that involves me I have refused, you have pressured I have been haunted by what you have given me You have betrayed your own lies Been the subject of your own games Have been the fool of reality I am done I have broken the reflection in the mirror Have erased every flash of memory Erased your pictures, your face, your words, your games, your lies, your fantasy I had care for you once, not any longer Lost myself in a so called love Have fallen for your betrayal You left me in despair I have decided I would stay the shadow behind you I can no longer live knowing you exist Is time for me to just say goodbye and no longer be haunted by what you once had given me I have felt regret, from your own life I can longer visit the past we once had I would teach myself how to become just a ghost, just a memory, no one I have wished no memory of your existence I have walked and I have left No more in the shadows of your memory
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patti
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2006-05-08 16:15:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: your shadow that walks
(User Rating: 1 ) by Keilantra on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:25:32 PM AEST (User
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well done. passionate and potent. li loved it. keep it up.
xXx * ~kei~ |
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Re: your shadow that walks
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Young_Poet on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:51:20 PM AEST (User
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wow this is really really good. Long,but more the greatness of it. Nice piece. |
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Re: your shadow that walks
(User Rating: 1 ) by kaitee on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:07:26 PM AEST (User
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i loved reading this one. it was long, but any shorter and it would have lost the thing that made it a great write
Awesome job
~Kaitee |
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