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Bitter-Sweet Nectar
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 08:23:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Already, I can feel the heat of your velvet flesh
Thin and pale, stretched over throbbing crimson
Your heart's rhythm trapped under my parched lips
And your pleasure-soaked scream beneath my piercing pearls
Already, I can taste your bitter-sweet liquid life
Feel it upon my rose-stained tongue
Like a nectar from Heaven for only you and me
Coppery warmth caressing my stone-filled throat
Already, I can see your love-misted eyes,
Exposing all that you try so damn hard to hide
The harnessed lust locked deep within your soul
Your intensified adoration that you never thought I would drag out
And I will kiss those lips you bit so deep and fervently to drown the pain and fight the emotion
So that you can taste our bitter-sweet nectar and understand that this is how it's meant to be
And you don't need to fight it anymore.
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
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2006-05-08 20:23:53]
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Re: Bitter-Sweet Nectar
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 10:02:43 PM AEST
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Whooaaaaaaaaaaa! Cowboy say this be pedigree poetry! Glad I met Jane_Doe today!
This sucker be gripping and dripping with coherent depth ... and such a "parched lips" passion that WHO (in their right mind) WOULD WANT TO FIGHT IT ANYMORE???
My multi-compliments, Ms Jane_Doe
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Bitter-Sweet Nectar
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by Sparkz16 on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 02:35:51 PM AEST
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i definatly felt the romance in it ppl who put it out to be a grotesque sort of dark way are lost and confused in there own little way sick minds lol nice work of art
Amanda
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Re: Bitter-Sweet Nectar
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 02:08:19 AM AEST
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Wow this is very breath taking. I like the message. I can relate to this. Very nicely done. And good title:)
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