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Captured in a Kiss
Contributed by
Kevin
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Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 03:54:54 PM in AEST
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Captured in a Kiss
The soulful look gleaming in your eyes
Your soft, echoing, gentle cries
Delicate hair, flowing in the breeze
These are what brings me to my knees
The gentle crash of the waves
The howl of the wind through the caves
The smell of salt lingering in the sea
Are the moments I feel you with me
Hand in hand, we walk along
Whistling, humming, our favorite song
My heart is yours for ever and a day
Never will my love decay
A feeling like none other, alive in my soul
Sweeping through my body, I have no control
A tingle in my hand, a twitch in my eye
A joy in my heart, without you Id die
You are the angel atop the Christmas tree,
The sparkle in the snow, the sugar in my tea
The rose without thorns, the moon at night
The reason for life and my only light
Here we stand, face to face
My hand caressing your elegant lace
No one around, nothing to miss
Time stands still, captured in a kiss
Copyright ©
Kevin
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2006-05-09 15:54:54]
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Re: Captured in a Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 05:01:39 PM AEST
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wonderful writing.
The picture can be clearly viewed. All the feeling, the things that happen, in general, everything. :D I would give it a 10 in rating |
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Re: Captured in a Kiss
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by Alison on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 11:50:15 PM AEST
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lets just say i would cry if someone thought that of me! anyway...a love that you said
"you are the angel atop the Christmas tree"
i love that! so great it made me smlie.
all in all an awesome write, a few things here and there you might want to change, but the feeling in it is wonderful. |
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Re: Captured in a Kiss
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by lost_chadow on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 03:07:43 PM AEST
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| Interesting write, almost makes us single guys jealous lol |
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Re: Captured in a Kiss
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by Lo2681 on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 06:58:24 PM AEST
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very nice work...i felt every word you wote down. Good job on this one i look forward to reading more:)
~Lo |
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Re: Captured in a Kiss
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:42:25 AM AEST
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I would have to say I think this poem is special enough for whomever that lucky person is!! How truly romantic....The whole piece flows along beautifully, and I love the fifth stanza the best, I think. Well done!
Scorp. |
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