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Nobody knows
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
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Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 09:07:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Nobody knows who i really am
nobody can feel the way i feel
nobody knows what pain i go through everyday
people see me standing there but do they really see the person there looking at?
do they see me?
do they care?
i dont really think i belong here in this world any longer
nobody knows how hurt i am
people think i dont care about my furture
but there wrong
sometimes i wonder if anyone really cares
sometimes i wonder if i should choose life or death
sometimes i think i know the answer ,sometimes i dont
nobody knows what im thinking
nobody beleaves me when i talk
nobody understands me
sometimes i wonder if people tell me the truth when i say
"what would you do if i died"
nobody cares about what i think,it has to be there way or no way at all
people think im nothing
people think i do nothing
and maybe just maybe i think the same...
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Re: Nobody knows
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by chaos78 on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 10:52:28 PM AEST
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| maybe u should try telling someone how u feel then they would know and someone alway care , good write |
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Re: Nobody knows
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by Alison on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 11:35:02 PM AEST
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| just a thought, what would have to happen to make you change your mind about all that? good write, you come across very clear. |
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Re: Nobody knows
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 12:43:28 AM AEST
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I agree with "chaos"
try tellin' someone how ya feelin'.. ur not alone..
Everyone, not matter how rich or poor, feels the very same way at some point-
B
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Re: Nobody knows
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 02:41:11 AM AEST
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^_^ You did good on this write Jennifer.
love mom |
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