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Butterfly Kisses And Useless Wishes
Contributed by
MyNameIsJonas
on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 01:05:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Wishing of dreams to come true
Dreams of wising that I could do
Anything at all, just for you
But I have limits, about to break
Unlimited in dreams, those limits will take
All the pressure in the world to make
How much I care and what I would do
Alas, Only In Dreams this can be genuine
Your face brings dreams of butterfly kisses
Left in my mind to rot as wishes
Only to come true was I fall asleep
Sweet memories of you, false but so real
If only dreams became reality
So would my nightmares too
But I would deal with that
If I could just be with you
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MyNameIsJonas
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2006-05-10 01:05:04]
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Re: Butterfly Kisses And Useless Wishes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 01:56:38 AM AEST
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Not your typical "dreams and wishes" poetry... You incorporate the theme well and demonstrate a subtle degree of melancholy.
Some interesting thoughts.
-Natalie. |
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Re: Butterfly Kisses And Useless Wishes
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by Lo2681 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 11:21:00 PM AEST
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| very nice....i enjoyed it. thanks for sharing |
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