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Winter Rose
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
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Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 03:04:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Winters gale beats at my back drifting, blizzard, focus
Yet one kind word can warm winter months from locusts
Amidst the footless trail a bone structure hopeless
cruelly cold is the judgment of man, vainly useless
Emptiness sits on the dawn of a wintry somber smile
Facing the lonely dark of night is worse than guile
Thinking: love is for the lucky and youthful strong
The great sun had turned his face away all winter long
The earth, undressed, goes down into a vale of grief
All the Trees reach to me with barren sighs for relief
With Mother Earth leaving her garlands to decomposition~
Longing for her sun with returning kisses of omission
This cold trys to undress, and bed me, for Death's dream
Beneath the snow I lie 'A Seed,' to wake from Love's spring
Dying for the Son, melting into the wind, for lifes stance
When the earth lays claim to my limbs~, then I shall dance
Copyright ©
Lilly-Quill
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2006-05-10 03:04:19]
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Re: Winter Rose
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by Sasha on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:09:59 AM AEST
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| A beauty of a poem, very well written indeed. |
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Re: Winter Rose
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 06:37:06 AM AEST
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very nicely done...this had great flow and imagery...i enjoyed it a lot.
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Re: Winter Rose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:41:28 AM AEST
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This is a fine piece of understanding and wisdom that when "earth lays claim" we can then dance to the Divine.
Yer on a roll of wonderful writes, Lilly-Quill. This one keeps 'em rollin'.
wabl
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Re: Winter Rose
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by katt on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:31:56 PM AEST
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Excellent write as always. Enjoyed it very much. Pure poetry in motion. Great imagery.
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Re: Winter Rose
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:59:14 PM AEST
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| A wonderful rendition of a new awakening. Winters chill and all its coldness. Mesmerised I was in the words, and so beautifully written. Thank you . Sue x |
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Re: Winter Rose
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by Lo2681 on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 12:44:42 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem. Very well done:)
~Lo |
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Re: Winter Rose
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:35:49 PM AEST
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~*Milly*~
You are on a roll my dear friend.
Each write is more captivating than the other.
I have fallen behind on ur writes. I have so much catching up to do. Always a pleasure venturing ur pages ~LQ~ Most impressive as always. Sorry I seem to repeat myself in my comments, lol. Such a beautifully penned masterpiece. Keep it up ~*Milly*~
hugs galor from ur fan/friend,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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