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EVERYTHING
Contributed by
BEE
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Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 05:39:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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EVERYTHING
You're everything i've wanted
My wishes came true when you came
You are the one i've always wished for
You're beautiful and amazing
No one can take you away from me
You have changed who i once was
Into someone new and incredible
I knew you were the one
When i first laid eyes on you
The sparkle in your eyes
That sparkled like diamonds
Your personality
Everything is the most incredible
You finish that one part of me i needed
You complete me
Your mind is contagious
And i will never let you go
You are everything
BY BRANDEN GOOODRICH
Copyright ©
BEE
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2006-05-10 17:39:43]
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Re: EVERYTHING
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:06:39 PM AEST
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with the exception of a few spelling errors..
and the use of "wants" instead of "once"..
this was pretty good Branden..
(use spl chk)
you may get a more favorable response-
..good stuff~
B |
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Re: EVERYTHING
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by ZforZachariah on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:06:13 AM AEST
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