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Greatful and Sad
Contributed by
RainDancer2005
on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 12:32:27 PM in AEST
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How can someone be so great,
To a person they just met?
To be able to make you feel
Like a real human being,
An equal.
Make you smile
With one word.
Make you laugh
With the craziest joke.
Make you melt
With just one glance.
For him to be able
To show you what a great time is like
Then why must reality set in?
The reality, you could never
Have that wonderful person.
The reality that
Already belongs to another
Or the reality that
You seem to not be his type
Just a friend
How can something
So great happen
And end within
Just a few hours?
Copyright ©
RainDancer2005
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2006-05-11 12:32:27]
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Re: Greatful and Sad
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by halli on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 07:57:14 PM AEST
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love can't be explained hun u just have to be yourself and hope for the best.
great poem very expressive and it says what a lot of people can't understand. good work
~halli
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Re: Greatful and Sad (User Rating: 1)
by jerseysue on Thursday, May 11 2006 @ 13:02:34 CDT
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Yes can identify with that.
Instant attraction,
Total reaction,
Love at first sight,
Reality bites,
Yes I can really understand this, been there got the T shirt. You have written it so well. Thank you ) |
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