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#1Beloved Judgement (Poems two and three deleted)
Contributed by
Millennium
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Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 09:13:38 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Beloved Judgment Day
Judgment day is close at hand
Dont think of me as clich
Well be left to die; left to rejoice,
Or left to cry, on beloved Judgment day.
Dont be afraid, afraid to admit it,
Dont hide in the dark, all alone,
It feeds on fear, for this day
Is near, on beloved Judgment day
Pray for your life, I hope youve been good.
Pray for your husband or wife, too.
Will you sing in Heaven? Or burn
In Hell? The choice is up to you.
On Beloved Judgment day.
Copyright ©
Millennium
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2006-05-11 21:13:38]
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Re: #1Beloved Judgement (Poems two and three deleted)
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 10:37:40 PM AEST
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Ah, but you have to wait. Your second and third poems are going to be deleted when a poetry moderator comes across them. It's site rules, which maybe you missed, somehow.
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Re: #1Beloved Judgement (Poems two and three deleted)
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by Keilantra on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:36:23 PM AEST
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| Manders, if youwere any more of a good writere, i could talk ot you anymore becuase i would be so jelly lealous. faublous writes. i love them. xXx ~kei |
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