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THE DEEP NIGHT
Contributed by
BEE
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 01:31:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
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THE DEEP NIGHT
As i lay here and look high into the sky
To see these shooting stars fly through my mind
I think to my self
Think about everything around me
I hear how the ocean roars and the wind blows
I see the sand get thrown threw the air
And i
I am just laying there
Thinking of every possible answer to my questions
Thinking how can i make everything i did wrong right
What can i do to make this world right
The combinations of phiscial and verbal words
Just hurt
To see how we act and do
Just hurt
Now can we as people change this act in mind
And not just play it off
Becouse this is life
Lets make the best of it
These words that i am thinking of kill me
Kill me from the inside out
As i lay here thinking
My mind is slowly getting tired
And i drift off into a deep sleep
Now dreaming
Dreaming of my perfect place
BY BRANDEN GOODRICH
Copyright ©
BEE
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2006-05-12 01:31:04]
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Re: THE DEEP NIGHT
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by Lo2681 on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 01:05:54 AM AEST
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Very beautiful....I love the beach and it is the most peaceful place i nt he world. When I get sad or I am lonely it is the first place i go:)
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