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Loving Dreams of Neverland
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:19:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Peter Pans Neverland of Wendy, fairies, and dreams
What wonders fly neath those magical stars of themes
What child hasnt wanted to fly to dreams of adventure
Paint me invisible, dreams of love past cruel winter
Love never grows-up does it; nor should I dare say
Yet many might relish leaving parents, likely I shall stay
Besides fairies, youll need angel-dust to be able to fly
Every time someone loses love, another dream-heart dies
Hooks mix of hate, jealousy, and failure worded its evil
Now the test for true-love comes, after the night, to revel
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Lilly-Quill
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2006-05-12 02:19:24]
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Re: Loving Dreams of Neverland
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 03:27:04 AM AEST
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What a wonderful poem, I especially like the last line. It is hard growing up and losing those dreams.
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Re: Loving Dreams of Neverland
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by anotherface on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 03:55:47 AM AEST
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| this is great. i wish i still thought like that! |
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Re: Loving Dreams of Neverland
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 05:12:21 AM AEST
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| beautifully written, a joy to read |
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Re: Loving Dreams of Neverland
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by wizard on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 05:43:44 AM AEST
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beautifully done...most magical indeed.
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