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Broken Bird
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 01:06:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I feel like I'm a bird
Which has broken wings
And has lost its voice
So can no longer sing
I want to migrate
With the glowing sun
To be gone from this place
Before winter has begun
But I cannot fly
So I have to stay in the cold
Which drains all my happiness
And makes me feel old
And so I watch in envy
At the birds in the sky
Who still have their wings
Who can still fly
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2006-05-12 13:06:58]
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Re: Broken Bird
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:31:32 PM AEST
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| I like this. Short and simple and sad. We all feel like that sometimes...at least a great poem came out of it! :-) Nice work |
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Re: Broken Bird
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by Lo2681 on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 03:50:13 AM AEST
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Very nice poem. I love the short discriptiveness it has. We all lack our wings until we find them. You will find your wings too.
Great job:)
~Lo |
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