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Mournful Pigeon
Contributed by
Opium
on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Calm my dearest, in my arms lay down to rest
Let all your anguish out; release them off your chest
You mourned enough on your lost love
Now my heart is yours sweet little dove
I kiss the tears off your face
And drown you in my sweet embrace
Everything you ask for, to you I give
In a sweet harmony you and I live
So take my life, take everything
Through those meadows we dance and sing
Of a beauty oh that is you
And love you shall renew
But the cruelty of this life persists
Where such happiness never exists
Once more, I sank your heart in pain
And my dearest pigeon is mournful yet again
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Re: Mournful Pigeon
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 08:46:21 PM AEST
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| very capturing wording, thanks for sharing this piece of art |
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Re: Mournful Pigeon
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by gina on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 08:10:18 AM AEST
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there's a point of view in this poem , the last stanza is what 's happenning a lot these days , bcoz of u men! leave those pigeons alone if u cant continue with them and if hurting is ur habbit :@per... :P
Gina |
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Re: Mournful Pigeon
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 05:43:15 PM AEST
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| Oh this is so lovely ... and very real. I love how you went from "sweet little dove" to "mournful pigeon" ... perfect choice of words. Excellent write. .... Jan |
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Re: Mournful Pigeon
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:35:26 AM AEST
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| i have to agree with Jan... the dove to the pigeon... this is so sad... beautifully written... |
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Re: Mournful Pigeon
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by Tanna on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 09:45:57 AM AEST
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| Very melancholy, but perfectly worded :) Great poem! |
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