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Angel Trapped In Tragedy
Contributed by
Alineko
on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 06:39:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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How do you see
this angel trapped in tragedy
The blood that flows
from her eyes
a constant reminder
of what she holds inside
Her ankles bound
her wings entwined
no longer can
this lost soul fly
Copyright ©
Alineko
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2006-05-12 18:39:15]
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Re: Angel Trapped In Tragedy
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by sararose1950 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 07:27:43 PM AEST
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| understood and liked your imagery- simple but vivid. Peace and Light |
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Re: Angel Trapped In Tragedy
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by Lo2681 on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 01:05:06 AM AEST
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Wow very short but deep. I like the way you discribed your feelings in this one...Good work hope to see more:)
~Lo |
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Re: Angel Trapped In Tragedy
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by PoeticHybrid on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 08:42:25 AM AEST
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| Very nicely written. The image you paint with your words is vivid and easy to see. |
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