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Insanity
Contributed by
fireydragon23
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Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 04:42:56 AM in AEST
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Control of insanity,
is taken in vain.
A loss of his loved one,
left him with pain.
A mind of his own,
a heart that is free.
A man with a knife,
now drops to one knee.
He looks at the stars,
then looks at the ground.
The man that he stabbed,
will never be found.
He sits and he ponders,
these thoughts without care.
The four walls of his prison,
will always be there
Copyright ©
fireydragon23
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2006-05-13 04:42:56]
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Re: Insanity
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:44:53 AM AEST
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Guilt is everyone's most captivating prison. No matter how justified you felt in doing something if other people won't understand you will be somewhat imprisoned.
Very good poem. The best poems are those that form themselves... Hope to see more like this. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Insanity
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by PoeticHybrid on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:01:28 AM AEST
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| Very nice. I like the flow of the poem a lot. It doesn't seemed rushed or forced. Nice write. |
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Re: Insanity
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by Aeris030388 on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:34:52 AM AEST
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Very goo!
-Roxanne. |
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Re: Insanity
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by Aeris030388 on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:35:49 AM AEST
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| *good. :p |
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