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I Live in the Land of Camels and Rafts
Contributed by
Aquaelius
on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 08:08:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Oh, mighty Helos, standing on high...
Will you not suspend thy torment?
I am not but sand or ragged peaks.
Oh, Lord Posiedon, will you not allow me land?
Ocean all around and none to drink.
Salt and lackluster upon my lips.
If I were land, my thoughts drift...
Drift towards Alanti-ese.
If I were blue,
I'd dream of mountains and trees.
So I have no hope...
These waves without hands,
And spanses with not grass.
And so I have no hope...
Deserts without camels... at sea with no rafts.
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Aquaelius
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2006-05-13 08:08:04]
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Re: I Live in the Land of Camels and Rafts
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 08:19:04 AM AEST
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I absolutely love all the imagery and metaphors. Great write.
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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