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When Words Fail You
Contributed by
MG_Akela22090
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Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:04:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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So do I sit here and wait for knowledge to come? Do I just wait for a sign? I cant keep waiting for something betterI can;t sit here and think things are going to be different the next time around.
Kiss the blood goodbye.
Say words you dont mean.
Just stop talking.
Forget the pain.
Just put the gun to your head and hope your aim is true. Just hope itll be fast cause you just dont want to feel anymore.
Suffocate yourself. These days get darker and longer. Every word has to mean something or youre gonna get it. Sorrow has no meaning. Emotion is dead.
So where do you put the grave? The ground isnt deep enough. Just keeping digging till you hit another hell. Tell yourself its gonna be better on the other side cause its just not getting any better here.
You can say you love them, but theres nothing left for you to love with. Your heart is stained a dark color and youre beginning to see gray again.
The pain is unbearable, but you continue on, choking back words that you want to say. Its just better to not say anything at all.
So as you stare into blackness and nothing comes you know youre finally dead on the inside and yet still breathing.
You know its just not worth it anymorewords have failed you, finally. So your world goes down and youre left speechless, with nothing to feel.
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Re: When Words Fail You
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:08:41 AM AEST
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Wow! Powerfully dark poem. Absolutely love the pic too. Something you took? Black and white photography is always so much prettier than color.
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Re: When Words Fail You
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by Keilantra on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:55:58 AM AEST
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this is literally potent, i enjoyed it, you habe aniteresting use of words, or maybe it just where you sused them
"kiss the blood goodbye, just stop talking"
i liked that a lot. keep wriritng, yu got a knack for it.
xXx
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Re: When Words Fail You
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by k2kdesigner on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 01:59:46 PM AEST
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| Very good poem I love it ...good expressions and I know I feel like sometimes too...Keep up the good work |
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