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Armed and Untable
Contributed by
keilantra
on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 12:10:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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On the floor
You lay beneath me
As I absorb
The beating of your heart
And the sound dissolves my fears.
Each moment goes by
And I continue to stain
Waiting for you to give me
A diagnosis
For my monotonous tears.
You move, softly
Pulling me up with you
You see the hole {you left} in my soul
And I apologize
For bleeding on your shirt.
You try to explain
But its too late
No use trying to fill
Empty s p a c e s
Up with dirt.
I've got your heart in my hand now
No, I'm not afraid to use it
If you take one more step
(I'm warning you)
I'm armed and emotionally unstable.
Copyright ©
keilantra
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2006-05-13 12:10:09]
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Re: Armed and Untable
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by kaitee on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 01:39:18 PM AEST
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i enjoyed the read. very abstract.......
~Kaitee |
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Re: Armed and Untable
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by Millennium on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 10:26:36 PM AEST
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ssssssmmmmmeeeexxxxxyyyyyy
super fantabulous!
i heart it mucho!! |
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Re: Armed and Untable
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by xmistyangel on
Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 05:12:32 PM AEST
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I'm armed and emotionally unstable.
...scary person lol |
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Re: Armed and Untable
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 04:27:41 PM AEST
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It's very poetic, you hold your pen well, or it holds you well. You write sadness while skirting around the reason, but poetically so.
Take care,
David |
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