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~Marionette~
Contributed by
Lo2681
on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 06:15:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Marionette full of grace,
Angry and hollow,
With a painted face,
Has these strings attached so tight,
And moves with every motion swiped.
Marionette dance for me,
Do the dance,
We want to see.
We dont care if you dislike,
You do what you are told tonight.
Marionette who loves you?
Do you dance around,
Because he tells you to?
Do you ever want to cut the strings,
And run around wild and free.
Marionette its ok,
You know,
I often feel the same.
Sometimes I want to run away,
But I cant because he makes me stay.
Marionette we are one in the same,
A hold is heald over us,
And this lonely world is the stage.
Copyright ©
Lo2681
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2006-05-13 18:15:40]
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Re: ~Marionette~
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by palebluesun on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 06:23:55 PM AEST
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| I know the feeling.This is a subject I gravitate to.Very nice. |
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Re: ~Marionette~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:56:47 PM AEST
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This has a hypnotic flow to it , beautifully written , but the meaning I get from this is
beyond sad, hugs hugs hugs hugs,
LG |
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Re: ~Marionette~
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by wizard on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 02:46:03 PM AEST
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very nicely done...i like it a lot.
wiz |
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