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shivering in fear
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 10:41:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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long time ago
a frustrated devastated young man
who felt pain and saw the loved ones
go night night right before his very eyes
shivering in fear
knowing his family is all sick unfree
unfaithful cruise through his memory
critical blow to his heart
incredible deep drops
of sweat with shivers
as if a ghost went through
and took his mighty strength core
the words i wrote
with the flow of note
ideas of feelings
were written in many papers
including this creative line
sad that it was written its mine
the medical world had a few to say
things arent looking good today
short life respiratory beat
soon they said he wont be standing
on his honest caring one of a kind feet
holding the hand tightly
not letting go
on the hospital death bed
displaying a vision living
with each other another century
but who am i kidding
prayers are made
miracles could save
hopefully in tie
the darkness shade
leaves silently with no clues
to wake up knowing everything is good
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Re: shivering in fear
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by katt on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 12:47:30 AM AEST
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Touching and hits home with me. my husband had congestive heart failure and passed away. my daughter had fourth stage throat cancer. I'm praying my sons will be ok.
Good poem. Enjoyed it.
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