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I remember that tattoo
Contributed by
Millennium
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Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 12:01:23 AM in AEST
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Yeah, I see the way you stare,
You look pretty scared,
Is there anything I can do?
Ive seen you somewhere before,
Have we met? Im not sure
But I remember that tattoo.
Were you the one, who so long ago,
Stole my heart? It was you! I know!
But back then, your face shone bright
Now the glow is not there,
Its stiffand square
And not so much of a pleasant sight.
Maybe your heart, too,
Was stolen from you,
Serves you right! Now you know how it feels.
Is there a big empty hole,
A big space in your sole?
Like someone stabbed you with their six-inch heels?
Congratulations, boy!
I hope you enjoy
One of your many heartbreaks,
Well, I guess I must go
Good day, and good show!
(P.S, Feel better, I know how it aches.)
Copyright ©
Millennium
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2006-05-14 00:01:23]
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Re: I remember that tattoo
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by Millennium on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 12:04:45 AM AEST
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READ THIS
hey this is me...mille....
i just realized that in the sixth verse i accidentally wrote "sole" instead of "soul"
just a heads-up |
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Re: I remember that tattoo
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 01:04:56 PM AEST
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i liked the last two stnazas.
"i hope you enjoy one of your many heartbreaks,"
and the last line, they were written very well. good job,keep it up. |
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