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a white rose petal
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 01:45:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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butterflies and dying trees
i press upon your window pane
while i scream i pierce the vein
and now you know i please
a white rose petal blackens well
i see you sleep within your room
nightmares share their view of gloom
and mourning sounds a solemn bell
___________________
I'll try now to let you see
all that's now debris in me
world wars match the imagery
but nothing helps renew
___________________
sunny days bring clouds to play
i'm the rain outside your soul
on my shoulder sits a crow
you've only moments left to pray
pillows turn into needles tar
sleep becomes a memory
let us keep the end of free
our slavery's a burning star
no more
it's always
a noose
no more
i'm always
to lose
dw
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Re: a white rose petal
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by anotherface on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 03:19:52 PM AEST
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| this is great! awesome use of imagery and metaphor. i love it |
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Re: a white rose petal
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:42:44 PM AEST
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Very powerful, and well done imagery!
Desolution and darkness here, but I sense so much more beneath the lines... |
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Re: a white rose petal
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 01:16:09 AM AEST
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DW~
Once again I find myself venturing ur pages and as always the contents are very impressive. WoW so powerful and dark, but I feel there is alot more than u are letting on.
A master of true poetic verse this is brilliantly penned. Well done my friend.
hugs galore,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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