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Smile Once More
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 07:56:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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its takes two to dance
one stares to pass
eyes to last
in ease
Take my own advice
Do whats right
Avoid the inevitable fight
Tossless nights
Wait with peace
Arrived with released-
Were my sinking feet
As a phantom heart missed its opportune beat
A troublesome mess
Like today-
Like all the rest
With salt and water
To breathe
In depth
In tomorrows wealth
With future help
From myself
Assistance from an anonymous source
A donation of persistence
In recommendation of resistance
From forces which increase
The chances of success
The odds which lay in bed
Probability, is the causality-
Which is never reached
Only in my head-
But, only when Im dead
In the most intense sense
Seriousness-
Stereotypical pyramid
Clay bricks withstand
Hurricane force winds
Thunder induces tears
Rain clouds form spears
Jolted, is the atmosphere
two to tango
one to step, out of line,
where one is kept
on his knees
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Re: Smile Once More
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:35:35 AM AEST
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terrific first and final stanzas jyss..
coming full circle as it were-
I'm left with much to ponder.. another great piece-
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Re: Smile Once More
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:42:58 PM AEST
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An emotion-riddled piece jyss...well expressed my friend.
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