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I'll be Your Dream
Contributed by
Gentlemanpoet
on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 06:04:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As you go to sleep tonight lost there in your tears,
I will be your dream my dear and chase away your fears.
There Ill be with soothing words and listen as you speak.
Ill care for you and give you love, no other will you seek.
The sun will shine and birds will sing, Ill be your brightest day.
Never will I leave you dear, always will I stay.
On wings well fly to touch the stars, your face will light the sky.
Pouring all my love on you, that love will never die.
Ill take you to a place my dear where rainbows fill your dreams.
Well stroll across the mountaintops and walk along the streams.
Ill come to you with kisses sweet, and touch your heart with mine.
To be the cup from which you drink, the table where you dine.
Ill be your blanket to keep you warm when winter spreads its chill.
And be your wings to lift you up and fly upon the hill.
When storms of life seem to rage, and fill your heart with fear.
Ill hold you close within my arms and be your anchor dear.
So as you sleep tonight my dear Ill come to you with love.
And be your shining knight with wings to lift you high above.
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Re: I'll be Your Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 06:15:41 AM AEST
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Very reassuring write. Good use of metaphors.
Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: I'll be Your Dream
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:42:58 AM AEST
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Aww...beautiful, devoting, and romantically optimistic. Whoever this is dedicated to, she is a very lucky lady. :)
~Ave |
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Re: I'll be Your Dream
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 07:47:18 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it, keep them coming |
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Re: I'll be Your Dream
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by katt on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 01:58:25 AM AEST
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Gotta love it. It's great. Excellent job~
katt
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Re: I'll be Your Dream
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by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 12:49:51 PM AEST
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| I really hate to ask this, but have you considered buying a rhyming dictionary? Or possibly trying something other than rhyming couplets? This is I think the third time I've seen the love/above rhyme from you. Dove, shove, of, glove, thereof, at least? And especially words with a good deal more rhymes--I like your stuff, I do. I just don't know if you're doing it on purpose or not. |
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