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A Bad Dream
Contributed by
RMWilson
on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:50:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Why are you treating me
like someone you don't need
In your life anymore? You're free
To do as you please, to succeed
Why are you ignoring my tries?
My attempts to find what's wrong?
I don't believe your lies
You're just singing that same old song
I hurt you, made you hide
What you kept in your heart
Why is no one on my side?
Why doesn't this thing chart?
I open my eyes, It's a bad dream
I felt so empty, you were not there
I was swimming upstream
My heart filled with despair
If I need anything at all
It's in your lap to rest my head
With just the nightfall,
Our eyes the starlight fed
Bad dreams that I knew
Were fake, unreal
But with our love I flew,
To dreams that I could feel
Copyright ©
RMWilson
... [
2006-05-15 11:50:30]
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Re: A Bad Dream
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by desireemiote on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:52:46 AM AEST
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very nice
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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Re: A Bad Dream
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:14:51 PM AEST
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Very well done:)
~Lo |
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Re: A Bad Dream
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by kaypa on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 02:35:29 PM AEST
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| love the poem... it has a great flow to it! |
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Re: A Bad Dream
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by 3660Days on
Wednesday, 24th December 2008 @ 07:08:23 AM AEST
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| I am not usually a big fan of ABAB rhyme scheme, but you might change my mind, who knows. Keep up the excellent work :-P |
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