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The Forest Kingdom
Contributed by
katt
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Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 07:35:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Concrete jungles hail paradise lost almost surrendered
vibrating heavily vexing noise besides pollution unceasing
out of control sky rocketing crime incurs destiny rendered
Repeating melodies from the green canopy cathedral ring
to humankind's past do age old songs extol an ancient link
solace from the worries and pressures of urban life to bring
Rising majestically the forest kingdom resembles a rare gem
ethereal in beauty harboring a plethora of threatened fauna
flora leviathans sense the oneness of that realm in each stem
Diversity of life within an emerald community fragile yet exist
mosaics of interlocking demand suspended in perfect symmetry
water, food, and shelter the triumvirate incorporated to subsist
Undergoing crisis and jeopardized by industry and financial gain
the great forest kingdom necessitates thoughtful consideration
manifestly vital a resplendent creation or it was bestowed in vain.
Copyright ©
katt
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2006-05-15 19:35:21]
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Re: The Forest Kingdom
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by Lo2681 on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:01:37 AM AEST
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Very nicely done. I like this piece a lot. Thank you for sharing it. Beautiful work hun:)
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Re: The Forest Kingdom
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by Lilly-Quill on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 05:26:23 AM AEST
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Well now, what depths of dimensions can top this deep? There's a whole lot going on with this valid and thought provoking muse.
Masterfully ascribe~
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Re: The Forest Kingdom
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:27:17 AM AEST
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I'm blown away-
it's not very often I come across work like this..
with so much profundity and idealism-
I'd like to quote my favorite lines.. but then I'd just be copying and pasting the whole write-
but for the sake of choice.. I'd say L11 was particularly brilliant..(a word I don't throw around to often)
Can't say enough.. and so I stop rambling and click 'ok'
Sincerely enough-
B
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Re: The Forest Kingdom
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 08:44:07 PM AEST
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wow katt,
i love this completely...perfectly done.
wiz |
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