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ITS BEEN LONELY
Contributed by
BEE
on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:04:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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ITS BEEN LONELY
I havent seen you
My ears have been blocked
My body needs you
But you have been dropped
Dropped like the rain from the sky
Deleted from the mind
I mean i miss you
But your slowley dissapering
I wish that you would come threw
Come threw my heart everyday
And make me go crazy
I wanna make your dreams
And i wanna be yours forever
Im tired of being lonely
So please come back
BY BRANDEN GOODRICH
Copyright ©
BEE
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2006-05-16 00:04:57]
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Re: ITS BEEN LONELY
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by Lo2681 on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:08:53 AM AEST
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This is very sad. But I think you will be ok:) I hope so. Best wishes:)
~Lo |
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Re: ITS BEEN LONELY
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:41:12 AM AEST
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hang tuuf you'll get there.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: ITS BEEN LONELY
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by Caged Soul on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 01:34:38 AM AEST
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Loosing love can never be easy, and you conveyed the associated emotions beautifully here. I loved it.
Ash~ |
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Re: ITS BEEN LONELY
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 07:04:48 AM AEST
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Well, you know what the great Shakespeare once said: "It's better to have loved and lost then to never have loved at all."
Perhaps it just wasn't meant to be and a true love is still to come. You should move on and not dwell on the past.
Best of luck to you! |
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