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I hate my animals
Contributed by
mylady
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:08:28 AM in AEST
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I hate my animal
Every one was happy, children enjoy there pet they had geese, duck. Chicken,
every morning they collect there egg couldnt wait to come home.
Some time they would watch the goose fight with the duck for the
children pool. Kids laughing at the gooses, cuz she was greedy didnt let the chicken
Eat kids laugh at the chicken tail they look like they had a hair cut on there tail.
Geese gave them a trim look like a broom.
One day we fine out we going to have neighbor we kept to are self.
Until I receive a letter tell us that our animal is noisy every time we want out
The geese would make noise I hate my animal cuz they make noise.
Told the children that geese must go children cry I couldnt do it I wait maybe
They would get use to the noise of animal. Children didnt want to go out side
They look at there animal threw the window children would say I hate my animal
They couldnt go out and be with there animal they want them to be quit so they can
Keep them. One of the children said why do we hate are animal the neighbor
Brought hate.
We receive the second letter. Geese must go. We told them we will give them away,
now the kids are afraid for there other pet when they go out side animal started to
make noise they say I hate my animal they are not quit.
One of the child said why the niebor give us hate and give us hate so we can hate our
AnimalsNow we dont have a more animal.
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2006-05-16 00:08:28]
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Re: I hate my animals
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by desireemiote on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 07:23:57 AM AEST
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It was a little difficult to read with all the grammar mistakes but I feel it was well written anyways. I like the point of how sometimes we have no idea what effect our complaints might have upon those we complain about.
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