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falling
Contributed by
halli
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 03:27:47 PM in AEST
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abstract
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falling through space
black all around
life flashing before your eyes
wishing for all the things
that have never been
you wanna open your eyes
but you're too afraid
will it hurt you wonder
will you make it when you land?
the fall seems forever
but it ends all too soon
the pain comes fast
but with the pain comes reality
pain is good because you're not dead!
you look yourself over
all is fine
just a little bit of blood
and nothing broken so it seems
and you look up and it seems your fall
wasn't even that far
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halli
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2006-05-16 15:27:47]
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Re: falling
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 05:40:07 PM AEST
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| I don't fall except in dreams... mainly because I don't go anywhere I can fall from LOL. interesting poem. |
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Re: falling
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 05:22:59 PM AEST
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Nice write this carries the reader right along
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