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Two Loves In One Dream
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 05:52:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dreams drop like the morning glorys dew
Every dream-seed dies for the love of you
Cripple boy~ who isnt handicapped in reality
Now, I lay you to rest near dreams to never be
You and I danced last night under the pale blue
Disheartened, you said, you couldnt follow through
Behind a glass-wall another love watched as we danced
In that moment I knew why we were trying romance
In the giving of love we receive strength to excel
Your love, and mine, had been freed from a prison cell
Even though, not enough strength to carry us all the way
You and I, two stars in the night, to shine brighter today
Fare thee well, my love, I set you free that you may Fly...
Your touch consoled and helped restore, the evil I left to die
May your new love cause your spirit-dream to soar mightily
Always, and forever, know~ Ill love you through eternity
Copyright ©
Lilly-Quill
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2006-05-16 17:52:40]
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Re: Two Loves In One Dream
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 08:55:12 PM AEST
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nicely done Lil,
i can relate to this..i love the last stanza.
great job!
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Re: Two Loves In One Dream
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:18:19 PM AEST
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Gracious, this is just so touching. And you have such
an amazing heart to have the softness to say good bye
in such a beautiful and loving way. I know of what you
speak, [I'm sure many do].
It's beautiful, hun. Gloriously so!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Two Loves In One Dream
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by katt on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:47:50 PM AEST
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oh so beautiful. I love poems like this. Excellent job~
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Re: Two Loves In One Dream
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 01:53:11 AM AEST
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Very touching. They say if you truely love someone you let them go:) Love is not selfish. Excellent write.
~Lo |
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Re: Two Loves In One Dream
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 01:15:18 AM AEST
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Milly~
Sweet girl, your beautiful poetry always stirs deep within my heart. I have come across alot of writers but u are one of those who top my list. Your work is sensational.
Fare thee well, my love, I set you free that you may Fly...
Your touch consoled and helped restore, the evil I left to die
May your new love cause your spirit-dream to soar mightily
Always, and forever, know~ I’ll love you through eternity
My how these beautifully quilled words weave deep into my heart. Shine on Milly~
warm hugs from ur fan/friend,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Two Loves In One Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 11:54:32 PM AEST
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WOW!! I loved this..and the last verse just clinched the whole poem.. Thank you for sharing your heart...
Jenni |
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