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Buries us deep
Contributed by
zealousnatalie
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Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 03:34:10 PM in AEST
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Buries us deep...
If only tonight we could writhe,
in the deep end of water.
Fighting for life, we can breath
In our new dark shelter.
Burning like fire- are your eyes
they penetrate my soul.
Puts me to sleep.
Buries us deep.
I am yours.....
Copyright ©
zealousnatalie
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2006-05-17 15:34:10]
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Re: Buries us deep
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by kaitee on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 03:54:26 PM AEST
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well written---good job
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Re: Buries us deep
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:36:55 AM AEST
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beautiful. really was
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Re: Buries us deep
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 05:05:27 AM AEST
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