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Midnight Egret
Contributed by
Tanner
on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Beneath a sky so full that stars could spill the bird wade in the midnight pond. Shrouded in shadows from beak to quill, oblivious to life beyond, it lorded over the reflected moon, like a hunter, intensely listening to the movements swishing and swirling, as if by a spoon, beneath the surface inside the womb of the dark, whispering waters.
His feathered steps; his august stance softer than the midnight breeze, sketched a silent moonlit dance that cast a spell to seize all souls, and life around the restless pond paused for a time - a vital beat - beyond the brewing rush, that bubbled beneath the sleepless sky.
Swiftly it speared the membrane of the quiet, night waters, posting ripples upon the face of stars now broken, now weeping from the slaughter. Torn from the fabric of all that it knows To the strange abode of a birds gnashing jaws, It found peace in the long, throaty coffin; and primal laws as old as time itself merged the fish with its mortal feathered, foe.
Natures debt now paid, it bade farewell with a gust from its sprawling wings. Its frame increased in a feathered swell claiming flight, at the pace of a king, and a speed that soon found it soaring far beyond clouds of regret, now a fading, flapping silhouette, nearing the sullen orb of a midnight moon.
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Re: Midnight Egret
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 03:11:29 AM AEST (User
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Wow ... I'm speechless ... totally awesome write. |
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Re: Midnight Egret
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 11:16:12 AM AEST (User
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lovely...i do so love the moon........and a clear dark night...... |
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Re: Midnight Egret
(User Rating: 1 ) by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 12:19:01 PM AEST (User
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beautifully written great poetic form, thanks for sharing this art work, welcome to the site, |
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Re: Midnight Egret
(User Rating: 1 ) by mckayla on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 11:59:21 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful poem. I hope to read more of your work!!
mckayla |
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Re: Midnight Egret
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 10:11:28 PM AEST (User
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*sigh* Beautiful...
Lindsey |
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Re: Midnight Egret
(User Rating: 1 ) by Paul on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 09:37:21 PM AEST (User
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great imagery |
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