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What is taken.........But is it?!
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 09:43:38 PM in AEST
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Something is there
Something is felt
Its,soo...Simple
Brought by a new fullfilment
A new being
And new path
This Is a new beginning, and new road for a path to cross
Its bold, yet soft
Its Airy, yet for one who has what it takes.....
I am for one........ A whole new start
Take what is given
Take what is in front
And
Take ,Me
Copyright ©
brew
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2006-05-17 21:43:38]
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Re: What is taken.........But is it?!
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:10:22 PM AEST
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Very captavating write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: What is taken.........But is it?!
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:51:51 PM AEST
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very emotive brew..
plain and simple..good work-
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Re: What is taken.........But is it?!
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 12:02:49 AM AEST
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| very nicely written |
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Re: What is taken.........But is it?!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 08:17:51 AM AEST
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This made me smile, I can't pinpoint why, but I don't think I need to.
Thank you. |
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Re: What is taken.........But is it?!
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:24:12 AM AEST
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I love the fact that life can be full of new beginnings, for the ones who have "what it takes" and "take what is given." Good poetry!
Butch |
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Re: What is taken.........But is it?!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:51:20 PM AEST
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A simple yet most provacotive style u have no
matter what u write it's most effective and deserves reading not 2 mention a coment. nice work dayna. most enjoyable.
Ben |
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Re: What is taken.........But is it?!
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 02:14:30 AM AEST
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very heartfelt sentiments..
:)
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Re: What is taken.........But is it?!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 12:15:28 PM AEST
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Never shallow are your thoughts Dayna.
[I love the author's note! : ) ]
Very thought provoking and unique, as always.
Hope all is well.
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