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Failing of Words
Contributed by
Heretic
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Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 09:40:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My writing is failing.
It is not expressing me.
I am losing it.
How shall I find myself.
Where shall I find myself.
It is not here.
I am falling into darkness.
It is a never ending pit.
A void in my world.
The void is my world.
Black is all I see.
White is no longer.
The black seems blacker then black.
It is nothingness.
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Heretic
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Re: Failing of Words
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by wizard on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 10:51:01 AM AEST
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i think you did well in this...ironic, though, that your emotions are conveyed quite well despite the authors note.
well done.
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Re: Failing of Words
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by falcon on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 11:25:21 AM AEST
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| Too well some of us know this void! Well done, Heretic, and i hope expressing it helps you see white again someday. |
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Re: Failing of Words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:08:08 PM AEST
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| I have yet to hear of someone that has had this become permanent. Hang in there, the words will come when they are ready....and I see they are not completely gone! :) |
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