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To da people
Contributed by
kamal
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Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 09:49:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Yo knowledge is real We're not here to be killed We are black people that knows but rather show off our personality w/ money, hoes, & clothes Although most of us don't understand the mentality Because we kill each other to gain a salary from the devil Because we see our own mothers as sex symbols Not positive role models Because we use drugs to give us that love Instead of getting it from our ladies Because we rather live our lives from a T.V point of view Instead of looking in each other eyes to see that our lives are just as beautiful Some of us are so greedy & when we see the needy we keep walking saying, "thats not my family, & "Why help him I didn't put him in that position When would we realize that our culture is not on a rise unless its w/ crime where in life did our culture loose their minds by believing thats just my baby daddy is the way to be we are all confused, abused, & used, but by who? Thats the question I leave with you.
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kamal
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Re: To da people
(User Rating: 1 ) by rapnificent on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 10:35:38 AM AEST (User
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your poetry speaks volumes. |
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Re: To da people
(User Rating: 1 ) by n2dep2care on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 01:10:05 PM AEST (User
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Kamal, how powerful is this! Daunting in style and exquisite in meaning
it takes my thoughts to new heights
And that’s what true poetry should always do.
Bravo!
Laurie |
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