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Your Everlasting Light
Contributed by
ManowarManiac
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
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With a very vibrant sense of hope
you help replenish my weary soul
Through your visions of the heavens
help enlighten my every sacred goal
You can symbolize the compassion
that everyone's heart has to give
For without your everlasting light
I'd surely not have a good life to live
The precious gift of which is sight
you empowered my eyes to behold
When I was in need of comforting
provided my shelter form the cold
At times your beauty overwhelms
yet never reflects dimly on the past
You possess a certain exuberance
to conquer every shadow that is cast
As you brighten every path I follow
my horizons will never be concealed
With the love you bestow upon me
my future is further more revealed
Your presence has always been bold
I know it will never fade away or die
For you are the light that guides me
on my journey toward the infinite sky
Copyright ©
ManowarManiac
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2003-02-06 10:30:00]
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Re: Your Everlasting Light
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 11:26:44 AM AEST
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| Nice write for your grandmother.The headstrong women are a treasure to behold.Keep writing. |
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Re: Your Everlasting Light
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 07:12:31 PM AEST
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shes a treasure to hold close to your heart,nice poetry for her,nice!
~ heaven angel~ |
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Re: Your Everlasting Light
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by ManowarManiac on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 12:47:17 PM AEST
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| Oh yes, my Grandmother is a very wonderful person, she is surely a treasure to have in my life. Thanx for the nice comment. |
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Re: Your Everlasting Light
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by ManowarManiac on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 12:49:10 PM AEST
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| Thanx, I actually got on my computer and was able to put the poem to a nice background and print it out, I put it in a frame and gave it to her as her birthday gift. I am sure she will treasure it forever. |
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Re: Your Everlasting Light
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by mckayla on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 04:24:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful write to your grandmother!! You are probably one of the many lights that guides her!
mckayla |
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Re: Your Everlasting Light
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by ManowarManiac on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 05:36:21 PM AEST
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| She loved the poem! She said it was the most beautiful thing anyone had ever done for her. I hope that I am a light that guides her. Thanx |
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Re: Your Everlasting Light
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 05:18:11 PM AEST
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Beautiful tribute, Manowar.... I;m sure she'll treasure it.....forever
Jenni |
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Re: Your Everlasting Light
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by ManowarManiac on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 10:30:29 PM AEST
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| Thanx a lot Jenny, I sure hope she does. |
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