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World Destroyed
Contributed by
PoeticHybrid
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Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 09:42:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Crimson tears stain her eyes
As she uncovers all his lies
Who she thought would be her last
Has become her painful past
I know it hurts, but it's for the best
Is what he said while she rest
Now cold is the bed they once shared
She was a fool to think he cared
Now she lay there cold and void
Because her world had been destroyed
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2006-05-20 21:42:05]
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Re: World Destroyed
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by slogan on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 10:01:50 PM AEST
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| very emotional spill..great job...jh |
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Re: World Destroyed
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by emystar on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 10:20:15 PM AEST
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Great writing.
It happens.
Good work.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: World Destroyed
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 04:19:29 PM AEST
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| i love this poem, its very powerful and has a great rythm to it. well done |
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Re: World Destroyed
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 09:55:10 PM AEST
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| good write, heavily sad :-) |
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