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heartbroken
Contributed by
rocken88
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Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 02:18:33 PM in AEST
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Curiosity was sparked
passion moved things fast
innocence was lost
and I cant get that back
I gave you my heart
and all my trust in you to hold it
but you didnt care
you tore it apart
Now my heart is broken
the pain is unreal
Ive gone numb
unable to feel
Im trying to peice it back together
I really am
but some of the peices are missing
so I dont think that I can
I really think I loved you
and I thought that you loved me too
maybe it was all a joke
all your said feelings were untrue
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rocken88
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2006-05-21 14:18:33]
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Re: heartbroken
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:06:47 AM AEST
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There is a sadness in here I can definitely relate to.
Chin up. Better days are ahead, (I know that's
impossibly cliché and I apologize for that).
As far as the write is concerned, you conveyed your
emotions well. Writing helps. I hope it gets easier for
you soon.
~Breezy |
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