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Then There Was You
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 03:07:34 PM in AEST
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My eighth post was an attempt to write something I could hear Meatloaf singing I tried again here, one hundred and eighty two posts later. Thank you, Tanya.
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I have never felt this way before Never held onto a dream ... quite like this I never wanted oh, so much To feel anothers touch Or lose myself within their kiss ~
And I never lost my self control Never surrendered everything I know God, I thought somehow I knew Everything that love could do But I was so far from the truth ~
Because then there was you Oh, then there was you
And you came from out of nowhere Like a full moon through the clouds Like a sunny summer day just when The rain starts pourin down With a voice that cut through silence Though you never spoke at all And the words you didnt say Were just enough to break resolve
And now everything I ever Thought I knew about this game Has crumbled to the ground Nothing will ever be same You gave me all your reasons And left reasonable doubt To think I thought I knew somehow The way that love turns out And I have never felt this way before I never held onto a dream ... quite like this I never wanted oh, so much To feel anothers touch Or lose myself within their kiss ~
And I never lost my self control Never surrendered everything I know God, I thought that I had seen Everything that love could be And I had all Id ever need ~
Until you came to me Then you came to me
And so now I know for certain What the poets speak about They say that when it comes to love There isnt any room for doubt And you shouldnt speak it lightly For its more than just a word And it truly means the most When it is felt before its heard
And I have never felt this way before Never opened all of my closed doors I dont know how this story goes Or felt so nervously exposed But now I finally know the truth And its all because of you
All because of you Because of you You
Ive never felt this way before ( never wanted someone more ) Ive never lost my self control ( I can feel you taking hold ) Ive never felt this way before ( never wanted someone more ) Ive never lost my self control ( I can feel you taking hold )
I thought somehow I knew Everything that love could do And I thought that I had seen Everything that love could be
And I have never felt this way before I never held onto a dream ... quite like this I never wanted oh, so much To feel anothers touch Or lose myself within their kiss ~
And I never lost my self control Never surrendered everything I know God, I thought somehow I knew Everything that love could do But I was so far from the truth ~
Because then there was you Oh, then there was you
Then there was you Then there was you Then there was
You ~
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Nazmythian
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by samwrue on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 06:18:01 PM AEST (User
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amazing, i wish i could write songs |
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 09:03:52 PM AEST (User
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Way to go Naz! Length kinda points to a live perfomance song. I idolized MeatLoaf! Gotta git the Real Player workin'!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 10:50:06 PM AEST (User
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nice job...i'd love to hear it to music.
wiz |
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 11:26:58 PM AEST (User
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*applauds madly*
holy heck snazzy!!! This is bloody brilliant!! I really want to hear this
sung! Good grief! You had better get a hold of Steinman and I mean
right QUICK!
This was astounding! I could even go so far as to say, this is
your best lyrical piece thus far. Brilliant, man.
~Breezy
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by suesmuse1 on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 06:42:14 AM AEST (User
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I love it! Hope to hear it with music soon!
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 03:56:39 AM AEST (User
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Your dUGHTER IS NOT ONLY SMART SHE'S VERY RIGHT.
sUPERCALLAFRADUALISTICEXPIALADOSHUS.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 07:16:23 PM AEST (User
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You always amazing me with your ability to write |
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:36:46 AM AEST (User
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Naz,
Brovo! I loved the song, you certainly do sound like you were inspired. Music and poetry, quite a talent pool!
Great song
Will/Terry |
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by CAUGHTinAdream on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 10:16:01 PM AEST (User
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omg this was seriously amazing! I could just picture myself singing along to this! Its definately something I can relate to! Well anyway you sure do have a talent for writing songs, keep it up! |
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