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please see through
Contributed by
gothineyeliner
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Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 09:31:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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there was a girl who called herself screw up
her father abused her
she wanted to die
so i am trying
to tell her my heart cries for her
i read her propasals
about suicide
and how she'd cried
i tryed to tell her
i understand
she might be dead, away, gone
i hope, i hope dear God
she sees this poem
that its not to late
i don't know her all the same
i can erase her hate
i have awnsers
so if you yourself know a girl
named screwup show her mercy
and no hate
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gothineyeliner
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2006-05-21 21:31:27]
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Re: please see through
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by Lo2681 on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 11:22:14 PM AEST
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| This is a touching poem. It has a very powerful message. You are an amazing person to put yourself out there to help her. Thats very nice aswell as your poem. |
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