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For The Last Time
Contributed by
ailei
on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 05:31:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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For the last time,
Let me tell you this once more,
I Love You,
And I mean it so true.
For the last time,
Let me call you once again,"Luvs"
Whispering your name in the air,
And let this day pass by.
For the last time,
Let me hold you in my dreams,
Kiss you the way it was before,
And feel the love once more.
For the last time,
Let me embrace you in my heart,
Reminiscene the love we had,
And let it flow through me.
For the last time,
I open the book of my heart,
To remember our love,
And keep it to the leaf of memories.
Copyright (c) Elaine Torrefiel Sy
Copyright ©
ailei
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2006-05-22 05:31:07]
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Re: For The Last Time
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by Sordida on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 06:38:25 AM AEST
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| I have always liked using repetition to make a point. I think it's a very strong piece and I like it. |
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Re: For The Last Time
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by EddieDean on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 04:05:41 PM AEST
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Very powerful work, it speaks of such strong feelings for them. You spoke from the heart, just as I try to do. Good work.
-Eddie Dean |
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Re: For The Last Time
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by candysears on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 08:21:19 PM AEST
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Very powerful write,very good..
God Bless! |
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