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The White Rose
Contributed by
candysears
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Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:41:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I savor the fragrance of the white
Rose
The beauty exquisite, bold yet,
Daring, gentle
It stands silent amongst all other
Roses
It glistens in the evening of the
Setting sun
His face is steady wide and true
As it kisses the gentle rain
Covering each petal with a kiss
Silently it close its wanton eyes
As each petal falls one by one
Dark brown it crumples and
Lay beneath the garden floor
Soon to find its way to a new
Beginning..
Copyright ©
candysears
... [
2006-05-23 19:41:29]
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Re: The White Rose
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by Aspiring on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:45:31 PM AEST
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Good write, I like this poem, it's refreshing, short and sweet
keep up the good work |
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Re: The White Rose
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by Countrytennis on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 09:01:00 PM AEST
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| Nice simple. Expresses the rose. |
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Re: The White Rose
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 09:37:13 PM AEST
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i love this write...it reads beautifully. what a great picture you've painted with this.
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Re: The White Rose
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 10:33:18 PM AEST
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A delicate delight this poem is. A touch of nature done in a loving way. Simply beautiful.
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Re: The White Rose
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by djdarkrose04 on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 11:02:25 PM AEST
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| A rose is quite an intriuing flower. And it is also one of my faves, hence my DJ name. =) I love your way with words in this. It painted the picture. Great job! |
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Re: The White Rose
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 11:03:45 PM AEST
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Carolyn~
A most beautifully penned piece of poetry that captures the true beauty of the white rose. You have done a superb job with this. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks for sharing with us ur magical masterpiece.
God bless u always,
~*suzie Q*~
PS thank u so much for ur kind comment on my poem. Very much appreciated. |
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