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Moment of Darkness
Contributed by
ed
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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From self made doors,
My blood pours,
Unlocked by a hateful key,.
I just can't see,
It wants to marry me,
I just cant see,
How its going to be:
Half dead,
Screwed in the head,
Falling to sleep in a heavenly bed.
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ed
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2003-02-06 19:00:00]
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Re: Moment of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 12:13:12 PM AEST
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| this is so good... |
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Re: Moment of Darkness
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:09:51 AM AEST
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| This is nice. you did a good job |
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Re: Moment of Darkness
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:41:31 PM AEST
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So good I've been there many, many times. I love the first two lines so beautiful. Hang in there.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Moment of Darkness
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:50:02 AM AEST
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| been there, felt that...you express this emotion powerfully and with a clarity that is rare when this feeling takes over. keep writing, you have a great style xxx |
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